What is this love?
A lovelift for no one
a lovegift for someone
Someone unmet
Someone 'introknown'
A heart so full of love
A heart set free of ache
But a love, lonelily at last
A love freely given
But unmet in 'givitation'
A love for love
a longing for love
Love for being loved
Love, raw, impassioned
A heart too full to be alone.
But this love for someone
Is not lonelily with no one
But gleemating with hope
Blossoming in utter 'jollitude'
-it needs new words to describe!
A love that waits impatient
yet is patient for its Unmet
A love not so freely given
and yet too freely dispersed,
unable to be desirated singly, lonelily
© copyright by Michèle Aimée Lahaie, 2010
6 comments:
I am feeling utterly humiliated and have a headache here. I think this poem is really cute and witty but I cant figure out what some of these word combos are! Or maybe they just are good sounding words?
I've noticed a trend of some of them following thought from it's counterpart above it. Such as "givitation" and "given."
Her heart is waiting for another heart's invitation prompted by it giving itself to her.
"Someone unmet
Someone 'introknown'"
This someone is revealed and known only through introduction. Once the intro happened, he has "known" her? I guess so...
"gleemating with hope" glee mating with hope! Breeds "jollitude"
Hahaha
"A love that waits impatient
yet is patient for its Unmet"
If I didnt understand through experience what your saying Id think you worked for oxymoron inc. Lol!
"lonelily" I see a lone lilly. In a whole patch of dandelions trying to blend in by sticking out from the grass, but not exactly grasping the idea of true beauty.
haha, oh Corkille. You're far too cute - and I hope that headache wasn't my fault! But you're going to have to quit all logic for a moment, and revel in the 'feel' of this one. It was written from a smitten-dream-state that love for no-one (well, no one yet) brings!
Some words have their own logic to them: but note, they are birthed out of whimsy. As the title proclaims: sometimes hearts are just too full of feeling to be able to stick solely to words that already exist. Why? Because these words just don't do the feeling justice! Have you ever found yourself wanting to express something - and instead, your words seem to be garble? a jumbled mess? all for trying to express something!
Givitate just sounded good. so naturally, it would become givitation when it was givated. lol
someone unmet, someone introknown -- it's someone you have not met yet, but someone you have a strong love for in your heart. you know them in your heart, but not in real life. Your mind and heart know something of what is to come, though it may be long before that someone comes along.
hahah, no no gleemating is just gleemating. I nearly wrote gleamating, since it was a better fit- but the spelling looked strange. But your mated definition is very cute, and makes it make sense! ;D
"A love that waits impatient, yet is patient for its unmet" - hahhahah! exactly! it's purely about experience! to the purely logical, of COURSE it doesn't make sense!
Lonelily: see Damien Rice for reference ;)
that was a mini breakdown of the language for you, for now ;) I hope that helped a wee bit!
;D
-M
Oh! This is lovely.
Some emotions are so strong that they are indescribable. And you demonstrate that quite well. This fills me with jollitude! Good Job!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so, and that it filled you with jollitude! :D
Haha, well you could see the progression as I started out all wrapped around the logical axle but then as I read and re-read the poem I began to loosen up. I would have gone back and redone some of it however I accidentally submitted my post without revising it!
Btw, the headache wasn't your fault. I had it before I came on, but this was a fantabulous (I can make up words too!) scapegoat.
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